Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Three Basic Challenges to the ESV

Crossway publishers continue their very successful (dare we say relentless) marketing of the English Standard Version (ESV) Bible. Justin Taylor, a Crossway editor, recently featured a new video on his blog in which “various leaders” explain “why they trust and appreciate this translation.” The ESV is, without doubt, the translation of choice among those whom Colin Hansen has described as the “young, restless, and reformed.” Questions about the ESV are rarely heard in the neo-evangelical Calvinistic movement which Daryl Hart has described as possessing "an extremely chummy atmosphere" (see his article here).

Here, however, are three basic challenges that might give one pause before jumping on the ESV bandwagon (you can also listen to an audio version here or view a pdf version here):

1. The ESV has a National Council of Churches copyright.

If you turn in a copy of the ESV to the bottom of the copyright page, you will find this note:

“The Holy Bible, English Standard Version (ESV) is adapted from the Revised Standard Version of the Bible, copyright Division of Christian Education of the National Council of Churches of Christ in the U.S.A. All rights reserved.”

The note, granted, is a bit ambiguous. Does it mean that the ultra-liberal National Council of Churches holds the copyright to the RSV, upon which the ESV is based, or does it mean that the NCC retains, as well, some rights to the ESV? What agreement did Crossway reach with the NCC in order to revise the RSV and create the ESV? Did they pay them a one-time fee? Or, does the NCC receive ongoing royalties from sales of the ESV? On this point Alan J. Macgregor queries:

Does this mean that every time a believer purchases an ESV Bible, he is financially supporting the National Council of Churches? (That body denies most of the fundamental doctrines of the Evangelical Reformed Faith). There are still many professing Evangelical and Reformed groups and publications, all enthusiastically encouraging us to buy and use this new version. The separation principles commanded in the Scriptures, and which our discerning forefathers solemnly held to, seem to have been discarded and forgotten (Three Modern Versions: A Critical Assessment of the NIV, ESV, and NKJV [The Bible League, 2004]: p. 50).

Even if there is some contractual arrangement whereby the NCC received an upfront lump payment and does not receive royalties for individual ESV sales, the challenges below remain.

2. The ESV is not, in fact, a new translation but an evangelical revision of a notoriously liberal translation.

A close inspection of the preface to the ESV is revealing. Though it claims to stand “in the classic mainstream of English Bible translations,” it is clear that the ESV actually issues from a far more liberal source. On one hand, the ESV wants to claim a place in the tradition of the classic English translations of the Protestant Reformation, but, on the other, it must admit that its roots are actually in later Protestant liberalism. Again, the preface captures the ESV’s awkward stance: “The words and phrases themselves grow out of the Tyndale-King James legacy, and most recently out of the RSV, with the 1971 RSV text providing the starting point for our work.” So, in truth, the ESV’s lineage is through the infamous English Revised Version of 1885, the American Standard Version of 1901, and the Revised Standard Version of 1952 and 1971.

The old RSV was roundly condemned by evangelicals when it first appeared. The most criticized passage was Isaiah 7:14 in which the RSV translated the Hebrew word almah as “young woman” rather than “virgin.” Conservatives, no doubt rightly, took this as a not so subtle undermining of the doctrine of the virginal conception of Christ. When the NT portion of the RSV was completed in 1946, Westminster Theological Seminary professor Oswald T. Allis wrote a stinging critique of the work titled Revision or New Translation? (P & R, 1948).

Granted, the ESV has corrected passages like Isaiah 7:14 (i.e., it reads “virgin” and not “young woman”). Still, the fact that the ESV springs from the RSV cannot be an irrelevant consideration. If one compares the ESV and RSV, he finds that the translations are very often is full agreement with one another. Some have suggested that despite corrections like that made with Isaiah 7:14, the ESV still retains some doctrinally questionable renderings from the RSV. Alan J. Macgregor cites the following passages as examples: Micah 5:2; Isaiah 53:9; 1 Corinthians 3:3-4; 1 Corinthians 7:36-38; Philippians 2:6; 1 Timothy 1:12; Hebrews 13:24; 2 Thessalonians 3:6; and Revelation 19:8) (see Macgregor’s Three Modern Versions, pp. 55-58). Let’s take Micah 5:2 as an example:

KJV: But thou, Bethlehem Ephratah, though thou be little among the thousands of Judah, yet out of thee shall he come forth unto me that is to be ruler in Israel; whose goings forth have been from of old, from everlasting.

RSV: But you, O Bethlehem Eph’rathah, who are little to be among the clans of Judah, from you shall come forth for me one who is to be ruler in Israel, whose origin is from old, from ancient days.

ESV: But you, O Bethlehem Eph’rathah, who are too little to be among the clans of Judah, from you shall come forth for me one who is to be ruler in Israel, whose origin is from old, from ancient days.

Note that the ESV follows the RSV verbatim except for the insertion of the word “too.” The doctrinal issue here would have to do with the change of “from everlasting” to “from ancient days.” Macgregor concludes, “the liberal rendering of the RSV is retained in full, so undermining the Deity of Christ, reducing Him to a created being who has a point of origin!” (Three Modern Versions, p. 56).

There are other issues related to the ESV’s general translation philosophy which Macgregor pinpoints. Despite the fact that it is championed by gender complementarians, “it appears that concession is sometimes made to the gender neutral lobby” (Macgregor, p. 54). Oddly enough, some of the old RSV’s gender specific renderings (composed before the ascendency of academic feminism) are made gender neutral in the ESV. Here are three examples from Romans (emphasis added):

Romans 2:28:

RSV: “For he is not a real Jew….”

ESV: “For no one is a Jew….”

Romans 3:4:

RSV: “…Let God be true though every man be false….”

ESV: “…Let God be true though every one were a liar….”

Romans 3:28:

RSV: “For we hold that a man is justified by faith apart from works of the law.”

ESV: “For we hold that one is justified by faith apart from works of the law.”

Finally, despite its claim in the preface to be an “essentially literal” translation, the ESV often makes use of dynamic equivalent methods, as does the RSV. One example cited by Macgregor is the rendering of the phrase en te paliggenesia (literally “in the regeneration”) in Matthew 19:28 as “in the new world” (though a note in the ESV provides the literal rendering).

3. The ESV is based on the modern critical Greek text.

The final challenge comes in the fact that the ESV is not based on the traditional texts of Scripture that were used by the Protestant Reformers in their vernacular translations (the Masoretic text of the OT and the received text of the NT). For the NT, most significantly, the ESV is based on the modern critical Greek text as found in the UBS 4th ed. and the Nestle-Aland 27th ed.

This means that as one reads through the ESV he will find translations based on texts that diverge from the Tyndale-Geneva-King James Version tradition.


Though the primary textual issues relate to the NT, here is one example from the OT:

In Psalm 145:13 the ESV includes a bracketed half verse in the text that the footnote explains “is supplied by one Hebrew manuscript, Septuagint, Syriac (compare Dead Sea Scroll).”

The others are from the NT:

The ending of Mark’s Gospel (16:9-20) is included in double brackets after an inserted note which reads: “[SOME OF THE EARLIEST MANUSCRIPTS DO NOT INCLUDE 16:9-20].”

The pericope adulterae (John 7:53-8:11), likewise, appears in double brackets with a similar introductory note inserted into the body of the text.

Philip’s confession in Acts 8:37 is removed from the text proper and relegated to a footnote.

Though these departures from the traditional text ought to raise considerable alarm, the more fundamental worry is the basic fact that the ESV is based on the modern critical Greek text. This means that one day a new critical text will be produced (UBS 5th ed./Nestle-Aland 28th ed.) by the secular academy. This means that eventually there will also be, in all likelihood, a NESV (New English Standard Version) or perhaps RESV (Revised English Standard Version) placed on the market. Who knows what decisions future editors of this Bible will make? Perhaps, for example, in future editions Mark 16:9-20 will be exiled to the footnotes! Translations joined to the modern academy must, of necessity, be unstable.


Let’s leave the final word to Alan J. Macgregor:

Despite all the hype and glowing statements about the ESV, it fails to deliver on its promises. It is in reality nothing more than a very mild revision of a very liberal Bible version. While there are some pleasing improvements over the RSV, not all the changes are for the better. By using the RSV, as their reference point, the translators have started in the wrong place. The leaven of liberalism is still there. The conclusion of the matter must be that it is “weighed in the balances and found wanting” (Three Modern Versions, p. 59).



The Christian Theologist said...

Agree completely, Jeff...and am very worried at the ubiquity of the ESV on US Christian websites (I live in NZ); particularly as the default version of RefTagger, which is a great service, but clearly part of the "relentless" marketing of Crossway.

I fear that the big battle for the TR/MT was lost years ago in the seminaries when they were allowed to bring in the N-A text (just a gussied-up W-H), thus undermining the KJB. Of course, the war still goes on in the provinces!

What do you think?

Jeffrey T. Riddle said...


Thanks for the feedback from "the provinces." Yes, to defend the AV and its traditional text is seen by most as a "lost cause," particularly among those who have been to seminary (even and sometimes especially evangelical ones).


Anonymous said...

I think you misread the copyright issue.

It is based on the RSV, which is copyrighted by the NCC.

The ESV is not connected with the NCC, any more than the KJV is connected with the Pope, to whom Erasmus dedicated the TR.


Anonymous said...

Having said that, I do admit your points 2 and 3 remain, and are more than a little concerning.

By way of disclaimer, I do prefer the KJV.


Jeffrey T. Riddle said...


Thanks for your comments.

Follow ups:

I do not believe I have misread the copyright info. I believe Crossway had/has some arrangement with the NCC to use the RSV as the basis for the ESV. I'd love to see Crossway directly address the issue through a statement or explanation of some kind.

As for your comments on Eramus being RC: It is a common tactic among those who promote the modern critical text and who want to discredit the TR to note that Erasmus was RC. In response we might observe that when Erasmus published his first ed. of the Greek NT in 1516 Luther had not yet posted the 95 Theses (1517). Everyone in the Western world was RC. Also, the traditional text used by the Reformed translators was, in fact, an edition from Beza, though based on Erasmus' work.

Anyhow, glad you found points 2 and 3 more convincing.


Joshua H. said...

Pastor Jeff,

Christian Century reported in an August 2002 issue that Crossway paid the NCC $625K in advance royalties. The magazine reported that rather than pay the fee over 10 years, the payment was a lump sum.

Jeffrey T. Riddle said...


Thanks for the post. My follow up questions:

1. Do you have the specific info on the CC article (date of issue, volume, number, page number)? I looked at the their online archive and there were two issues in August 2002 (Vol. 119 Nos 17-18, August 14, 28). None of the article titles I saw seemed to be about the subject (you have to pay to read the articles, which I did not). Perhaps it was in a news summary that is not posted in the archive.

2. If the sum is correct, how was it calculated?

3. If this was for "advance royalties" what, if anything, has been paid since 2002?


Will Kinney said...

Hi saints. Pretty good article on the ESV. I have a lot more on this new Vatican Version, and I really mean Vatican Version. The Nestle Aland 27th edition comes right out and tells us that the ever changing UBS/Nestle-Aland critical Greek text is under the direct supervision of the Vatican to create an "inter confessional" text to help unit the separated brethren. The ESVs (3 different editions in just 10 years) often rejects the Hebrew readings and adds hundreds of words to the Hebrew text from the so called Greek Septuagint. There are many things wrong with the ESV and here are some of them from my own studies.

The Ever Changing ESVs 2001, 2007 and 2011 = just another Vatican Version.


Hugh McCann said...

Josh & Jeff: https://www.questia.com/read/1G1-90989211/new-funds-boost-ncc-news

But through cost-cutting measures and, most recently, a $500,000 grant from the Lilly Endowment and a $625,000 advance royalty check from a conservative Bible publisher, the National Council of Churches has balanced its books...

The $625,000 check from Crossway Books received this summer carried with it a bit of irony. Well before Edgar was elected to the NCC's chief executive post in late 1999, the council had sold special rights to its Revised Standard Version Bible to Crossway. That publisher edited "a derivative" version for a theologically conservative market—the English Standard Version. Other publishers with rights from the NCC use the updated NRSV translation. Rather than stringing out royalty checks over the term of the ten-year contract, Crossway negotiated a large advance payment. "It's a win-win situation for us both," said John Briscoe, NCC director of development. The sum in turn enabled the NCC to erase a debt...

Jeffrey T. Riddle said...

Very interesting, Hugh. Thanks for sharing.

Hugh McCann said...

You're most welcome! Thank you for you work on this important topic!